What do you think of this poem i wrote im is it good or lame plz be honest and tell me what you think!!!

Question

What do you think of this poem i wrote im is it good or lame plz be honest and tell me what you think!!!

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Here I am,brOn the ground.brMy lifes broken,brBut I dont make a sound.brPick myself up,brWhy even try?brJust to be shoved back down againbrIve fallen so many times, Ive run out of tears to crybrBroken heart,brOnce again.brBut I can barely feel it anymore.brIm becoming accustomed to the pain.brOnce morebrShattered pieces of this once whole life,brLay in my hands.brCutting through, ever so silently,brBut no one understands.brMy mouth is closed,brBut my heart is torn wide open.brScreaming,brFor someone to hear me.brBleeding,brFor someone to see me.brDying,brFor someone to heal me.brJust for someone to come along tonightbrAnd take everything in my life thats wrongbrAnd make it right.brJust to stay with mebr.please stay with me, tonight.