Friday, October 5, 2012

What do you think of my poem?


Question


What do you think of my poem?
Please dear God, no more, no more.


Answer


I dont think its grammatically correct to say quotthee is the onequot it would be quotthou art the onequot. And quotThou no longer needest to cryquot.brbrMostly I was worried that it was an actual suicide note. Not....a big fan of depressing poetry. Good luck getting unbored.



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