Question
Do you like my poem?
im running to the mountains to reach the sky
Answer
In my humble opinion, this poem has the thoughtfulness and depth of a year old, but the vocabulary content of an th grader. The idea is an awesome concept, and a brilliant way of expressing emotions on the matter, but if you could tune up some of the words to reflect wisdom as well as strength, I believe it would have a greater impact on the audience. I did very much enjoy reading it, I just figured you may be looking for a little honest constructive criticism. Thanks for sharing it with us.
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